Can He Save Her?
Narrative Writing
WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero!
You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could be telling you what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?
Fill in the below table to help you plan.
Planning:
|
Your Thoughts and Answers:
|
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
|
I will put the picture in the beginning of my story
|
Hero:
|
Spider kid
|
Villain:
|
Green goblin
|
Other Characters (if any):
|
Lily
|
Problem:
|
falls
|
Solution:
|
The invisible spider-man saved the Lily
|
|
|
If beginning, what could happen next?
|
|
If ending, what happened before this scene?
|
|
Start Writing Here:
Spider kid
In a little city there was a kid aged about 14. He wasn't just any kid, he was bitten by a radioactive spider that made him be able to climb walls and stick to the ceiling like a spider, and that's why he is called spider man. but before he knew it, he was a superhero. He saved lives and he saved vehicles but he had never done something like he has today.
It was 7:36 in the morning and he got a call that he had to go to the town circus that happens every year. He got their and saw on top of the skyscraper next to the circus their was the green goblin about to drop an innocent girl of the side of one of the highest skyscrapers in the world.
He raced up to the top just to see the girl screaming in horror as she plumages down from the skyscraper. Spider man dives down and tries his hardest to be aerodynamic and grabs her by the arm just as she was about to hit the ground. She and her family were so grateful that she was still alive. She and her family hugged Spider man and went home relieved that she wasn't dead.
Hooray shouted the city ̈spider man saved the day again, WUHU !!!.”
everyone was happy for the girl. Spider man went home exhausted after a big day, he snoozed away to sleep and dreamed about getting a girlfriend and kissing her. Spiderman is tired so he wakes up late which is a bad thing for school but he is not sure for himself.
He gets up and realises that he is suspended for three days for being late. But that is good for him because he gets to save more lives for the city.