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Tuesday, July 2, 2019

Spider Man Saves The Day Again

Spider Man Saves The Day Again.

By Peter

In a little city there was a kid aged about 1. He wasn't just any kid… he was bitten
by a radioactive spider that made him be able to climb walls and stick to the ceiling
like a spider, and that's why he is called spider man. but before he knew it, he was a
superhero. He saved lives and he saved vehicles but he had never done something like
he has today. 
    
It was 7:36 in the morning and he got a call that he had to go to the town circus that
happens every year. He got their and saw on top of the skyscraper next to the circus
their was the green goblin about to drop an innocent girl of the side of one of the
highest skyscrapers in the world.

He raced up to the top just to see the girl screaming in horror as she plumage's down
from the skyscraper. Spider man dives down and tries his hardest to be aerodynamic
and grabs her by the arm just as she was about to hit the ground. She and her family
were so grateful that she was still alive. She and her family hugged Spider man and
went home relieved that she wasn't dead.

Then the whole city shouted hooray  ̈spider man saved the day again, WUHU!!.”  
everyone was happy for the girl. Spider man went home exhausted after a big day,
he snoozed away to sleep and dreamed about getting a girlfriend and kissing her.
Spider man is tired so he wakes up late which is a bad thing for school but he is not
sure for himself.

The Green Goblin ended up dead because he pushed the girl and also jumped with Lily to get away from Spider Man with a parachute but his parachute didn't work so he died because he hit the ground too hard. After that Spider Man went home tired. He went to sleep but then he woke up in the real morning finally thinking to himself ¨DAMN I thought that was real but it was just a dream, Sad¨ 
                                 😀The End😀

1 comment:

  1. Hi Peter I'm Amber
    I think you have done a great job of introducing the main character and saying how old he was and what had happened to him. Maybe next time you could fix how the writing goes of the page.
    This writing is sort of like mine how we both write about the same thing.

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