Hi Peter I really liked how you used so many adjectives in your writing, and the picture you used. Maybe next time you could make your google drawing a little smaller. From Amber
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Hi Peter
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used so many adjectives in your writing, and the picture you used.
Maybe next time you could make your google drawing a little smaller.
From Amber